What’s working:
- More in logic, have rationale this week compared to last week. And the text works well as an explanation and narrative.
- Visually pleasing, the form, the layout, the format, images.
What’s not working:
- Not sure about the four-page layout format.
What’s next?
- Other than the size adjustment of your images, the language is quite similar to your images now and from the website. Maybe try to use a film camera to make your images. (That would be a way of showing the position, the medium of film is important.)
- Experiment with a film camera, change the process of generating and use the photograph
- Try a variety of subjects, more subjects (such as people’s faces).